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Tears streaming,
Head screaming.
Nothing seems to make sense.
Why you,
why me,
WHY??????????
you lied to me,
and i loved you.
LIAR
Forget the hugs
and o's that i sent you.
Forget the way I talked
to you and made you feel.
You're a fake, a fraud, a
LIAR!!!!!!!!
Nothing you can do can save
you from being dismissed from
my memory.
I gave you a second chance.
Im stupid.
STUPID
S   T  U   P  I  D
I hate liars.
At least you can leave
with the satisfaction to
know that i loved you
with my whole being.
Three Days Gace.
I hate every thing about you.
Songs calm me,
but you never will.
I'm ending my life for you.
You pushed me over the edge.
Nothing makes sence,
except the end.
No stopping me now.
Liar will be my last words
off my lips
you shallow,
self centerd
jerk.






lia.........
LIAR!!!!! LIAR LIAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CrystinaPie Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My parents accused me of being a liar .I looked at them and said , ''Tooth Fairy, Santa ,Easter Bunny, '' 
and i walked way like a boss.
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RiptideTheWolf Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
its painful you know
its sad how so many people know this pain
how an entire group if not more people can understand and say they've been there

if i may speak freely though in my case
im not sure whats worse
the fact of knowing that everyday im without her is a day i dont want to live
or the fact
that it will never end because she wont take me back
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bella-katniss-2555 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just wrote down exactly what im feeling
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Rima1110cross Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Artist
thats really hurtful but loving it so much
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AshlieLovesHayden Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Artist
Im feeling like this right now.
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MelloDramatic93 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
I think you just expressed everything running through my mind at the moment
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t0xlorz Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Word.

Anyone who goes through something like this knows how painful it is. :c
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2010
It seems to happen more and more these days.
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t0xlorz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh god I forgot that I left this up. XD
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:iconangelic-ins0mniac-xo:
i love this. i had "Liar Liar" playing on my ipod and then i read this. Awesome.
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vivienami Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
who sings the song?
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:iconangelic-ins0mniac-xo:
Never shout never.

here have a link to it [link]

x
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:iconvivienami:
vivienami Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
thanks (:
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:iconangelic-ins0mniac-xo:
no problem :heart:
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:iconthejax:
theJAX Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Anyone heard the Used's song?
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
That is funny! I love that song!
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DoomPie777 Featured By Owner May 20, 2010
Amazing! I'm going to watch you now :3
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
Oh thank you! I need to get back into writing! I just have been soooo busy with life. But now I will have to write more!
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DoomPie777 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2010
:)
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LittleMissNoItAll Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2009
THis is an amazing poem and i know exactly how u felt. Im so there rite now.
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Ciel-Lucy Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel EXACTLY same as you. IF this poem is about how you once felt. Or feel.
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
it was, thanks!
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Ciel-Lucy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome
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twilightdepression Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2008
IS this a real poem? like about u??
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
yes it is. but i am not....dead. lol.
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twilightdepression Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2009
lol neither am i...... cuz i promised my friend i woodnt kill myself.. n he promised me back....he is an actor tho so evry1 wood be crushed if he did.. (jackson rathbone.. plays jasper in twilight)
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2009
crazy! i went to school with him.
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twilightdepression Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2009
seriousl omg!
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cottonlemon Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2008
i really wish i could write like this, i'm too "ashamed" of my writing to post it, but this, this is beautiful and everything i wish i could say.
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
Oh, don't be "ashamed" of your writing. The only reason why I post my writings on here is because of the fact that no one in my family has ever been on here. If they knew how i really felt more than the 25% of the time i let them know how i feel, I would be so embarrassed.
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cottonlemon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
ahh same here, i have a whole book of writing but none of my family knows about any of what i feel, same with my pictures, but your writing is so good, it captures so much.
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2008
thank you. and i have just recently shown my art to my parents, and told them some of my ideas.... surprisingly, they are ok with what i tell them. They dont love it, but accept it. i hope you can do that eventually.
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cottonlemon Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2008
well my writings are like suicidal...and i dont think theyd liek it..they like heard about it once and freked and were gonna send me to a counselor...and my pictures...no...ahaha
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
well... i go to a counselor b/c i was suicidal... even if you cant tell through all of my writings. it is the best thing that happened for me. and im soooooooooo much more happy with myself because he has helped me go through all the anger and depression that i had built up. the only reason why they knew is because i tried to kill myself and half way through it, i called my sister and she couldnt understand me and came over to see what was up. its not that i really wanted to die, i just wanted to feel again. anywho. sorry for telling you my life story. im sure its boring and what not, but im an open book and feel that if people talk about what happened, it might stop or help someone else in a similar situation.
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cottonlemon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
no its fine*for openeining up* iwent through somethin kinda similiar..i just rejected the help though, mainly just 'cause it was this really mean school counselor that like no on elikes... but i'm glad youre happy now!
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2008
i rejected help the first time too.... this was actually my 2 or 3rd time to try counseling... they wanted to put me on pills.. that i did not want...
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simplemishap Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008
I can tell you were definitely strong-emotioned when you wrote this, yah?
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
oh very much so. sorry it took me so long to get back. I was just tired of being lied to by just about everyone i know.
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simplemishap Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2008
No problem. I know the feeling. O.~
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notalentwasteland Featured By Owner May 18, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
awe..awesome!!! i would send this to my stupid self centered recently ex friend. she can rot in hell because of what she put me though!
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
lol. thanks... i think i actually wrote it about a guy... lol.. but friends work too!
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notalentwasteland Featured By Owner May 28, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
they definetly do
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apollosvengance Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
amazing!!!! ima watch you
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BloodyRaven23 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2007
I love it. Its just......wow.
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2007
thanks!
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nowherejuggalette Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2005
wow...wow. i love it! especially the ending. you are an incredible poet. im going to start watching you...
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allaroundblueartist Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2005
thanks. that is so nice of you! i thought that only my older poems were good, but you gave me a confidance boost!
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